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Travis Coats



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PostPosted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 6:40 pm    Post subject: Places no one should ever see
Subject description: Eccentric Ambient Piece
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This is a very eccentric composition. Tell me what you away with in mind after listening. Very Happy

Listen

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 7:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

Very nice sounds - the beginning is spectacular

When the 4/4 conventional drum came in (and the base) you lost me. Just my opinion, of course.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 7:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

Thanks Mosc, it was meant to be a very "theme-based" song. I think that middl part you are talking about will need better mixing, I feel the 4/4 signature of those drums is a little too much, too fast now that you point it out. I am glad you liked it, I didn't expect it to be commented on so soon. Very Happy
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 7:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

It's a good one that could easily be a great one. That chanting should is very arresting and evocative. The mix with the other sounds is very dramatic and interesting. Even the piano seems to fit, but the drums just seemed out of place.

But consider that I'm an old timer. Very Happy

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 10, 2007 12:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

I think this is beautiful, the drums coming in for me create a sort of a contrast between an inner and an outer world.
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 10:03 am    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

Must be because you are so young. Wink

Seriously, this is why one must take criticism (even constructive) with a bit of salt. Everyone responds differently, and differently at different times.

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 1:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

Quite a new piece with some neat transitions.
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 3:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

Thanks for all the comments. This one was very experimental and I was antsy to hear what people thought about it.

Mosc: Constructive or Deconstructive criticism, I respond well to either and I like to hear what people say about or take away. I believe what you said about the transition is partially true. Nothing that can't be fixed by some better mixing on my part...maybe a better fade and good lead in.

Sometimes it is hard to mix good solid beats with more soft, pad-like instruments and acoustic one like the piano. I love the combination though so I will keep going until I get it right. Very Happy

Thanks again.

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 18, 2007 4:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

An interesting journey. Nice sounds.
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