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forficule
Joined: Jun 29, 2004 Posts: 37 Location: Paname
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Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2004 8:35 am Post subject:
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Hello everybody,
I was on holiday, it was great, the weather was nice, and my feet aren't tired.
I have made a new piece, "quand on s'amuse",it's on my website : www.forficule.fr.st
and I hope you will comment this one, even if you don't like it,
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mosc
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Joined: Jan 31, 2003 Posts: 18197 Location: Durham, NC
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Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2004 8:47 am Post subject:
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Welcome back.
I like this piece. It's very abstract - not pretty music. It has definite form and structure, the combination of sounds is interesting. Listening to it is an experience.
I have two suggestions which you can of course take or leave.
The sharp noisey stuff at the beginning is in hard stereo. This is good, I like the effect, but I think it would be good to soften it just a touch by mixing just a tad of the left channel to the right and visa versa.
Near the end, the speeded up voice comes in what seems to me a bit too loud at first.
I realize that I may be critisizing to essential parts of your music. Maybe I was supposed to be "upset" by those. Certainly, the sounds and textures aren't designed to be gentile.
BTW, would you please add your location to your profile. Thanks... |
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forficule
Joined: Jun 29, 2004 Posts: 37 Location: Paname
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Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2004 11:57 am Post subject:
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Thank you mosc for your comments,
and I'm happy to have your advices, but I wanted these sounds loud, and I think it's a carateristic of this piece, and for me that gives a sort of charm.
Naturally I'm not able to judge my piece because I'm not objective, too bad.
But thank you again for your comment.
N.B. : Paname is a popular term for Paris
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forficule
Joined: Jun 29, 2004 Posts: 37 Location: Paname
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Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2004 12:04 pm Post subject:
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well, it doesn't work
I wanted to change my profile and add my Location as mosc said, but it doesn't work.
HOW CAN I DO????
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aquanaut
Joined: Apr 25, 2004 Posts: 313 Location: Montreal
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Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2004 12:52 pm Post subject:
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I enjoyed the second half of the song, when everything is settling down.
you could go further with a sampler, chopping the flute part and doing call and response stuff with other element. chopping an argeiphonte lyre file and reprogramme it. Last edited by aquanaut on Thu Aug 26, 2004 1:01 pm; edited 1 time in total |
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blue hell
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Joined: Apr 03, 2004 Posts: 24079 Location: The Netherlands, Enschede
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Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2004 12:56 pm Post subject:
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forficule wrote: | well, it doesn't work :(
I wanted to change my profile and add my Location as mosc said, but it doesn't work.
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Use the 'Profile' link at the top of this page, the profile buttons near every posting are to view profiles only.
Jan. |
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forficule
Joined: Jun 29, 2004 Posts: 37 Location: Paname
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2004 2:19 am Post subject:
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Yes, I know that, that is what I have done
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FaceDancer
Joined: Aug 15, 2004 Posts: 15 Location: Paris France
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2004 3:44 am Post subject:
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very very interesting.... do you know Boredoms ?
i have heard your other songs on your web site, your work is exactly what i'm looking for.
peut être pourrait on bosser ensemble
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forficule
Joined: Jun 29, 2004 Posts: 37 Location: Paname
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2004 4:32 am Post subject:
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Ptin, un français! ben bonjour mon gars, et oui pourquoi pas bosser ensemble?
But have you a website with your work or something?
Si je connais Boredoms? of course! with the crazy singer!
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mosc
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2004 7:45 am Post subject:
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I don't know what the problem could possibly be with the profile, unless it is related to an Apache 2/ PHP bug that I just fixed. Would you please try to update your profile again, and if it doesn't work, please let me know by PM, there may be something else going on here that needs fixing. |
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forficule
Joined: Jun 29, 2004 Posts: 37 Location: Paname
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2004 7:52 am Post subject:
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ah!
well, hum, I'm happy to say to you that it works.
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mosc
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2004 8:06 am Post subject:
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Thanks... |
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FaceDancer
Joined: Aug 15, 2004 Posts: 15 Location: Paris France
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2004 8:13 pm Post subject:
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forficule wrote: | Ptin, un français! ben bonjour mon gars, et oui pourquoi pas bosser ensemble?
But have you a website with your work or something?
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like i said on the privet mail i have send you
http://forum.watmm.com/forums.html?showtopic=6257
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Dovdimus Prime
Joined: Jul 26, 2004 Posts: 664 Location: Bristol, UK
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Posted: Mon Aug 30, 2004 3:47 am Post subject:
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Greetings Forficule
Hmmm. I don't like this track as much as some of your others. It doesn't seem to have as much purpose, as much of a definite identity, as "Transport" or "Chats Gouttierres" or some of the others. I do like the bit where it all breaks into tranquility at about 2 minutes though. Eerily calm, as if you're expecting something really extreme to happen next.
Sorry, I don't have any specific comments or criticisms to make, so maybe not very helpful - I'm a bit of a layman when it comes to this sort of music.
Cheers
Dovdimus _________________ This message was brought to you from Beyond The Grave. |
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forficule
Joined: Jun 29, 2004 Posts: 37 Location: Paname
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Posted: Mon Aug 30, 2004 5:17 am Post subject:
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Thank you Dovdimus Prime to tell me that you don't like this track.
HONNESTY
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Dovdimus Prime
Joined: Jul 26, 2004 Posts: 664 Location: Bristol, UK
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Posted: Mon Aug 30, 2004 10:47 am Post subject:
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No, actually I do quite like it! It's just not nearly as good as some of your others. But if it was rubbish, I'd be happy to tell you.... _________________ This message was brought to you from Beyond The Grave. |
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Johan Zwart
Joined: Mar 26, 2004 Posts: 496 Location: Utrecht, Netherlands
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seraph
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Joined: Jun 21, 2003 Posts: 12398 Location: Firenze, Italy
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 6:07 am Post subject:
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after reading all these posts I had to listen to it.
at first I thought my speakers were insanely broken then I realized they were not. holy cannoli _________________ homepage - blog - forum - youtube
Quote: | Don't die with your music still in you - Wayne Dyer |
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