Logic or PT? And what do you think of my track?

[JasonSomethiNg]

https://soundcloud.com/jason-something/joel-the-mouse-2

I recently finished a track, one of my better ones, on GarageBand. It's like kind of electronic dancey but not really. I just did whatever sounded good in my head. What do you guys think of it? Any constructive criticism is welcome.

I use GarageBand and FL Studio, but I'm thinking of getting a new DAW. Should I invest in Logic Pro X or ProTools? I already quite like the workflow of GB so I'm guessing Logic is very similar...

Thanks! <3

[A E J O T Z]

Nice tune. I like it.

This forum is full of experimental musicians, so they aren't likely to ever tell you you're making music the "wrong" way.

Personally, I prefer music that doesn't follow rules because following rules makes music predictable.

You threw a couple of curve-balls in your tune; built an expectation and then didn't go there. I like that.