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PostPosted: Fri Mar 06, 2020 3:25 pm    Post subject:  Give me feedback plz
Subject description: Electro musique création
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Hi evry one, first thx for looking at thos post.

I create few electro song, can you have a look and give me some advise so i can improve.

Direct link :-https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MehZS6-KXRM
-https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1mq4EGoW12E

If you don't like click on unknow Url, you can find me on youtube with this :

-Sim7 Looking forward
-Sim7 Life is celebrating

Thx for your time, comments on the video are very welcome.
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 15, 2020 10:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

i add a new one that you listen here:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DrLzNRvTSiE

Or put Sim7 smile on google.

again thx a lot if you can give me feed back on the youtube page !
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 15, 2020 2:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

welcome party!


Let's see, feedback/advice,. well who am I to judge.
It's not really my kind of music but apart from that it does sound well produced and it all fits together. Smile
Basically I don't hear anything wrong with it but maybe it could use a bit more imagination. That's something
I often struggle with myself though, it's easy to get drawn to certain familiar patterns.

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