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Virtualex



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PostPosted: Fri Jun 22, 2018 8:48 am    Post subject: Electronic Track | Intense synths | looking for feedback ... Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

Hello EM!

I nearly finished a new track and I am looking to give it the final touch - if you have any hints, I'd greatly appreciate it!

https://choon.co/tracks/0uz21mka58m/erupt

I started this track during the final weeks before the production release of a software project I have been working on for over two years. It was a stressfull time and the track resembles that.

Had to put the project aside as it grew too big for my computer to play it in real-time.

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With the release of FL Studio 20 and its consolidate feature it became easy/fun enough to render tracks to .wav and pick them up again if I wanted to change something (which I do all the time Smile.

It is the first project I used the new Output Synth Package my wife bought me as a birthday gift in spring Smile.

"Finished" it today as I can't do too much else after I "epilated" my shin bone with the lawn edge trimmer last weekend and now I am sitting here with a thick bandage - just in the right mood for some "intense synths" Smile.

Have fun and a nice weekend!
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 25, 2018 10:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

Nice track! I found myself nodding to the rhythm a lot and it has good slow build. The feeling of mounting tension is definitely present. I wished to hear a soaring melody over the arpeggios/chords or even a signature timbre on top as things got bigger. Maybe pitching up that vocal moan that appears on the downbeat and hammering that into a "hummable" melody towards the end...
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 30, 2018 2:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

Digiton wrote:
Nice track! I found myself nodding to the rhythm a lot and it has good slow build. The feeling of mounting tension is definitely present. I wished to hear a soaring melody over the arpeggios/chords or even a signature timbre on top as things got bigger. Maybe pitching up that vocal moan that appears on the downbeat and hammering that into a "hummable" melody towards the end...


Thank you for your comment!

I agree that my tracks lack some "musicality" and there are usually more arps than melody (I just like it Smile.

Adding more to this specific track would've been too much IMHO. It already feels so crowded and gave me quite some headache mixing it Smile.

I am playing around with different arrangements on this one to test the new FL-Studio 20 feature that allows editing different arrangements on the same project. I'll your tips in mind - maybe I'll find a synth that cuts through and we get some soaring melody eventually Very Happy .

Thank you
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