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raymondlfinn



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PostPosted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 9:25 pm    Post subject: New Here Need Criticism Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

Wut's Up?

My name is Ray and I've been screwing around making music for a short while. I was wondering if anyone would be willing to take a listen to some of my stuff and tell me what you think.

Appreciate it,

Ray


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PostPosted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 11:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

Hi Ray
welcome to electro-music.com Very Happy comments will follow Exclamation

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 7:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

I really like it! Is it a coincidence that it's 9.11 mb?
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 8:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

drsmoo wrote:
Is it a coincidence that it's 9.11 mb?

I am not Ray but I would think so Exclamation Shocked

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 9:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

welcome Ray. Good to have you here.

I like this track. It has enough changes to keep it interesting. It has a nice feel to it. Good one...

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 10:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

Ray my man that is AWESOME work!!!!!!!!!!!!! u r a very talented person in this field i would hope u would take this further
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 12:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

Hi Ray.

It's about time I posted some of my music too! :)

This reminds me of Schlammpeitziger- he of Soniq/ Mouse on Mars fame.

Well worth listening to. (http://www.schlammpeitziger.com/)

Perhaps you should send some stuff to him?

Keep up the good work.

Tom

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 22, 2005 3:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

nice pentatonic thing going on.

what did you do the drums on? i'm not a fan of that snare drum!

there are some interesting synth sounds in there, but i'd mess around with envelopes more, because when you do at 3 minutes 30 or so, it becomes more interesting. i reckon that's something you could exploit more.

it's certainly a fresh sound, i would say let down mainly by the drums. maybe go more for an 808 electro style sound?

very nice.
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