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isopropanol

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seraph
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Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 5:45 am Post subject:
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Hi isopropanol (C3H8O)
I listened to your "piece". how would you describe it  _________________ homepage - blog - forum - youtube
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isopropanol

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Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 6:19 am Post subject:
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hi seraph..what do you mean for describing it? _________________ Every solution breeds new problems |
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seraph
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Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 6:36 am Post subject:
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isopropanol wrote: | hi seraph..what do you mean for describing it? |
is it in a particular style does the style have a name does the song need to be in a particular style to enjoy it is it simply organized noise
It sounds interesting as long as it does not last for too long  _________________ homepage - blog - forum - youtube
Quote: | The man that hath no music in himself, nor is not mov'd with concord of sweet sounds, is fit for treasons, stratagems and spoils; the motions of his spirit are dull as night and his affections dark as Erebus: Let no such man be trusted. - W. Shakespeare |
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isopropanol

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Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 6:44 am Post subject:
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Hi seraph...i dont know if it can be categorized under any existing music style, if yes..i dont know which one! I like atmospheric IDM, and glitch music style..but i dont know if this track can be called IDM or glitch..its just sounds and notes that organized together make me feel nice...when i sequenced the track i havent any particular style in mind...yes i agree... it could last for more time..but this is not the final editing With your comments and suggestion i will improve it.... _________________ Every solution breeds new problems |
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mosc
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Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 8:18 am Post subject:
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I like the way it starts off, distant and mysterious. The percussion throws me off - it breaks the imagry. Seems like two or three pieces mixed together. Just my opinion. _________________ --Howard
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isopropanol

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Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 8:32 am Post subject:
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mosc wrote: | The percussion throws me off - it breaks the imagry. |
Hi Mosc..yes I like mysterious atmospheres too.. Sorry but i didnt get the meaning of what you said...its not your fault..english is not my primary language By the way..its a positive or negative feedback? thanks a lot anyway
PS: its just one percussions line..but very weird and distorted  _________________ Every solution breeds new problems |
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mosc
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Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 1:17 pm Post subject:
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Don't worry about my critisizm. You speak much better English than I speak Italian.
I am positive about your piece.  _________________ --Howard
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jkn

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Posted: Sat Aug 13, 2005 8:34 am Post subject:
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You're off to a great start with this. It feels a bit 'not together' yet which is the same thing I think mosc was hearing - it seems to be several ideas that are separate that could be together - but aren't quite melded into each other yet.
I like the atmospherics in the background - I like the drums. I think the drums might be too far up in the mix - they stand out more than I'd like. The piano feels a bit stiff to me in places - and that might be what you're going for which is pefectly fine (it's your piece after all!).
I'd play with the levels of the different parts a bit more if it were my track.
I've heard a lot of music similar to this sound - you're bringing in some interesting elements of your own. |
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elektro80
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Posted: Sun Aug 14, 2005 5:01 pm Post subject:
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I like this. However the glitchy perc stuff kinda stops working for me after a while. But the start is great.  _________________ A Charity Pantomime in aid of Paranoid Schizophrenics descended into chaos yesterday when someone shouted, "He's behind you!"
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isopropanol

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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 3:02 am Post subject:
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mosc wrote: | Don't worry about my critisizm. You speak much better English than I speak Italian.
I am positive about your piece.  |
Hi mosc...you dont need italian to speak with people around the world, but you need english to do it..thanks for your positive feedback...
jkn wrote: | It feels a bit 'not together' yet |
yes thats what i think of it and other tracks i created. I dont know how to mold well all the components of the track..when you say
jkn wrote: | I think the drums might be too far up in the mix - they stand out more than I'd like. |
Do you mean the drums transposition or the levels?
jkn wrote: | The piano feels a bit stiff to me in places - and that might be what you're going for which is pefectly fine |
Me too..but like said before i cant play a keyboard so i have not an idea about how to compose a piano tune well. And by the way I'd like it to be more "dynamic" and "structured" but thats not what I had in mind when i composed it
Can you suggest me which parts of the track you would level better? Can you give some examples basing on the track you listened to?
elektro80 wrote: | However the glitchy perc stuff kinda stops working for me after a while. |
Yes i agree..too much repetitive..isnt it? You suggest to articulate better the percussions? Thanks a lot all of you guys for the great feedback  _________________ Every solution breeds new problems |
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