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Anthrosand
Joined: Apr 26, 2004 Posts: 13 Location: UK
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Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2004 4:11 pm Post subject:
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Hi everyone
Would appreciate if you could spend 5mins of your time to give me feedback on a Bitstream Dream remix I've done for a comp.
www.obliqueism.com/remix
Ive tried to keep this in a kind of kruder/dorfmeister "type" remix (you know the sort of tune that would fit nicely on an advertisement) with a nice aura, punchy bassline and some tweaking with samples over the top.
I aimed to make the listener feel like they want more - works for me but I'll soon see if it does for any1 else.
Cheers
&ND
NB: Apologies if this is not good newbie etiquate! _________________ - www.obliqueism.com - |
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elektro80
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Joined: Mar 25, 2003 Posts: 21959 Location: Norway
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Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2004 4:25 pm Post subject:
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THis sounds solid.. good! Is this a remix of your own track?
I think this one stays interesting until the end. Commercials are often way shorter.. but I think several sections are just poerfect for various commercials.  _________________ A Charity Pantomime in aid of Paranoid Schizophrenics descended into chaos yesterday when someone shouted, "He's behind you!"
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mosc
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Joined: Jan 31, 2003 Posts: 18310 Location: Durham, NC
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Posted: Mon Jun 21, 2004 7:15 am Post subject:
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| Pleasant enough, but not very interesting. Maybe this is what you want. |
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elektro80
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Joined: Mar 25, 2003 Posts: 21959 Location: Norway
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Posted: Mon Jun 21, 2004 7:18 am Post subject:
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Well.. I think it is interesting.. but not interesting the way Mozart is or Pergolesi. However, I think this one suits the purpose.. but it is too long for commercials. I reckon you could make 15 different tunes for commercials out of this track. _________________ A Charity Pantomime in aid of Paranoid Schizophrenics descended into chaos yesterday when someone shouted, "He's behind you!"
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astroid power-up!
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Posted: Tue Jun 22, 2004 2:39 am Post subject:
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nice production. easy to get lost in that sound. The wah guitar sounds a little overtly cheesy/detective movie to me, but the other sounds are spot on...
really like the very small bubbly sounds
nice minimalist feel with the vocals. god the production is good! really well done.
cool with the trumpet. you really stretch your samples to thier limit. i think the development is great!
good aesthetics! _________________ Astroid Power-Up!: "googleplex" available at:
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Anthrosand
Joined: Apr 26, 2004 Posts: 13 Location: UK
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Posted: Tue Jun 22, 2004 2:12 pm Post subject:
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BIG Thanks for the Comments
| Quote: | THis sounds solid.. good! Is this a remix of your own track?
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Thanks - no it's a remix for a coompetition of a track by Bitstream Dream - it is completely different though!! I have listened to your music Elektro and I think it is excellent so this means a lot
| Quote: | | Pleasant enough, but not very interesting. Maybe this is what you want. |
You have written good comments about my music before so at least I now know you are honest!! PS:I think its an interesting tune!!
| Quote: | | nice production. easy to get lost in that sound. |
thanks Production is a real problem for me and often a criticism of my music so this is great feedback
| Quote: | | The wah guitar sounds a little overtly cheesy/detective movie to me |
Agreed....I quite like that though!! _________________ - www.obliqueism.com - |
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mosc
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Joined: Jan 31, 2003 Posts: 18310 Location: Durham, NC
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Posted: Tue Jun 22, 2004 3:16 pm Post subject:
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| Anthrosand wrote: | | You have written good comments about my music before so at least I now know you are honest!! |
I just listended again, and I like it much more than before.  |
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seraph
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Joined: Jun 21, 2003 Posts: 12398 Location: Firenze, Italy
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Posted: Tue Jun 22, 2004 11:41 pm Post subject:
Re: (Funky Electro) Darkest Hour - &ND Oblique Mix |
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| Anthrosand wrote: | | Would appreciate if you could spend 5mins of your time to give me feedback on a Bitstream Dream remix I've done for a comp. |
I did spend the time to listen to it. It sounds pleasant to me
Is it all virtual synths and loops I like the Indian inflection of the singer. (check my song "Indialuna" at http://go.berkleemusic.com/seraph
I hope you do not mind I plug my song on your thread ) _________________ homepage - blog - forum - youtube
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Anthrosand
Joined: Apr 26, 2004 Posts: 13 Location: UK
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2004 4:22 am Post subject:
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No problem Seraph - plug away - access to independent music is what this site is all about!!
Good sounds by the way _________________ - www.obliqueism.com - |
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Anthrosand
Joined: Apr 26, 2004 Posts: 13 Location: UK
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Posted: Wed Jun 30, 2004 5:46 am Post subject:
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Didnt even make make the top 10 in the comp so perhaps you were right Mosc!! _________________ - www.obliqueism.com - |
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mosc
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Posted: Wed Jun 30, 2004 9:07 am Post subject:
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| You know, competitions are not great for the arts, IMHO. Do what you want for the joy of doing it. Don't be attached to other people liking it. A lot of music I didn't like at first I like now. Even this piece, I liked much more the second time through. |
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egw
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Joined: Feb 01, 2003 Posts: 1571 Location: Asheville NC
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Posted: Wed Jun 30, 2004 10:05 am Post subject:
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comp - is that competition or compilation?
I don't think music or art should be competitive.
It's all about self expression, and competition detracts from that. |
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Anthrosand
Joined: Apr 26, 2004 Posts: 13 Location: UK
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Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2004 5:00 am Post subject:
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| Quote: | I don't think music or art should be competitive.
It's all about self expression, and competition detracts from that. |
Agreed - very inspirational words! thanks _________________ - www.obliqueism.com - |
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Dovdimus Prime

Joined: Jul 26, 2004 Posts: 664 Location: Bristol, UK
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Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2004 10:14 am Post subject:
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Hey mate
Whereabouts in the UK are you from then?
Had a good listen to your tune. It's got good atmosphere and that and the production sounds tight to me so nice one. However, overall I find the track pretty boring. Not a whole lot is happening. It sounds to me like some beat is going to come in at some point and it just doesn't happen - which leads me to get a little bit frustrated. It does make me feel like I want more but not in a good way.
Sorry for the crits but no sense in offering them if you're not going to be honest.
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