electro-music.com   Dedicated to experimental electro-acoustic
and electronic music
 
    Front Page  |  Radio
 |  Media  |  Forum  |  Wiki  |  Links
Forum with support of Syndicator RSS
 FAQFAQ   CalendarCalendar   SearchSearch   MemberlistMemberlist   UsergroupsUsergroups   LinksLinks
 RegisterRegister   ProfileProfile   Log in to check your private messagesLog in to check your private messages   Log inLog in  Chat RoomChat Room 
 Forum index » Discussion » Introduce Yourself
First attempt at an edm track - feedback please?
Post new topic   Reply to topic
Page 1 of 1 [3 Posts]
View unread posts
View new posts in the last week
Mark the topic unread :: View previous topic :: View next topic
Author Message
aurvandil



Joined: Jul 18, 2015
Posts: 1
Location: England

PostPosted: Sat Jul 18, 2015 3:12 pm    Post subject: First attempt at an edm track - feedback please? Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

This is my first attempt at composing a edm track, I would really appreciate any feedback on the song so far:

https://soundcloud.com/luke-ironside/nosedive

Thanks in advance!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
Curry



Joined: Feb 19, 2015
Posts: 2
Location: Sweden

PostPosted: Sat Aug 01, 2015 2:48 am    Post subject: Re: First attempt at an edm track - feedback please? Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

You've got some pretty good melodies. However, you need to work on your mixing skills. That LFO bass is too loud IMO and it overpowers everything else. A track that's too loud without being mastered creates distortion. You don't want that. Check out what "sidechain compression" is. This song needs it and you'll have great use of it in the future.

Thanks for sharing, and have fun producing more music!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website
Queer



Joined: Jul 05, 2015
Posts: 34
Location: Canada
Audio files: 3

PostPosted: Sat Aug 01, 2015 1:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

OMG you're so young!
Track sounds great, true the wubs are a little loud in the middle section.
Also nothing great happens real low down so you can probably tighten this mix a little by filtering out below 20-50 hertz.
Lately I've been experimenting with mixes that have just ONE compressor on the master bus (side chained or insert) and driving it to get the mix I want.
Good job hon!

_________________
https://queertunes.bandcamp.com
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website
Display posts from previous:   
Post new topic   Reply to topic
Page 1 of 1 [3 Posts]
View unread posts
View new posts in the last week
Mark the topic unread :: View previous topic :: View next topic
 Forum index » Discussion » Introduce Yourself
Jump to:  

You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot vote in polls in this forum
You cannot attach files in this forum
You can download files in this forum


Forum with support of Syndicator RSS
Powered by phpBB © 2001, 2005 phpBB Group
Copyright © 2003 through 2009 by electro-music.com - Conditions Of Use