New song about to record any thoughts welcome. Split-screen

[muso1070]

Just finished a new song and did a little split screen live video for it.
Would be great to hear any feedback before I go about recording the studio version.
Thanks

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S2q85eaS4uU

[muso1070]

And the Lyrics

Waiting For The Sun

I've been thinking, It could be time
Build a wood house, Cedar, Oak and Pine
Fix the land up follow our dreams
Oh the sweetest thoughts, this is what I see

Cause I'm waiting on the Sun
If we plan It our day will come
It just takes time on the curve
So we're waiting, waiting on the Sun

You've been thinking the timings right
Chase the feeling that grows inside
Close an old door for a new life
Oh with a glimmer of hope, set this thing alight

Cause you're waiting on the Sun
If we plan It our day will come
It just takes time on the curve
So we're waiting, waiting on the Sun

Instrumental
Oh.... Oh....Oh... waiting ...
Oh.... Oh....Oh... waiting ...

I've been thinking, It could be time
Build a wood house, Cedar, Oak and Pine
Fix the land up follow our dreams
Oh the sweetest thoughts, this is what I see