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Thegardener
Joined: Mar 10, 2021 Posts: 1 Location: france
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Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2021 4:24 am Post subject:
Need your opinion Subject description: Could you give me your opinion on my compositions? |
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Hello.
I am French and I don't speak English well.
I would like to make you discover my music and I would also like to have your opinions.
I share with you my soundcloud link as well as a track on my youtube channel.
I will be delighted to have your different opinions.
Kindly
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x3vvmJ_TfJo
https://soundcloud.com/user-619067873 |
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djfoxyfox
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Joined: Feb 05, 2003 Posts: 3211 Location: Nazareth, Pennsylvania, USA
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Posted: Sat Apr 10, 2021 11:47 am Post subject:
Discovering Music |
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Thank you for posting about your music. If you request a spot in the Artists forum, you might find get some more responses and have a place to talk about your music.
À bientôt, _________________ Bill Fox------------------|\-------------
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goedikey
Joined: Dec 29, 2009 Posts: 13 Location: CANADA
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Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2021 1:59 pm Post subject:
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Bonjour du Québec,
From a technical perspective, the mix and sound level seem OK but your youtube video is a bit more rough/harsh for some reason. Maybe it is clipping.
From an artistic perspective, it is also OK but remember there are many people doing similar trancy chill type music it needs to be very original to get any attention. This is why many are using vocals to elevate the music.
There seems to be some repetition in the sounds you use and the songs are a little bit linear. Maybe add some variation?
In general, everyting seems to be made from a good strong foundation so keep working on it (we all have the same struggles I am certain).
Bonne chance! |
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djfoxyfox
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Joined: Feb 05, 2003 Posts: 3211 Location: Nazareth, Pennsylvania, USA
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Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2021 2:10 pm Post subject:
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goedikey wrote: | ...your youtube video... | To what video are you referring? Please provide a link because I suspect that the video might not be mine. _________________ Bill Fox------------------|\-------------
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goedikey
Joined: Dec 29, 2009 Posts: 13 Location: CANADA
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Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2021 2:52 pm Post subject:
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djfoxyfox wrote: | goedikey wrote: | ...your youtube video... | To what video are you referring? Please provide a link because I suspect that the video might not be mine. |
Not yours but the OP's video.. |
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